A Fresh Perspective

banyan-tree-shoppingI started the following short story several months ago, and while I had an idea of how I wanted the tale to begin, I honestly wasn’t sure how it should end.  So I let it sit, worked on other writing projects, and forgot about it.  I came across this piece five days ago and still didn’t know how things were going to turn out for my protagonist, but I felt more inclined to take the journey with her.  I’m pleased with the outcome, and I hope you will be, too.  Enjoy!

A Fresh Perspective

8 responses

  1. Great story. A Fresh Perspective is a wonderful story. I love your scene descriptions, and characterizations. Really good eye. Only 2 spelling errors on page two: quiet time, not quite time; and cellars doors probably should be cellar doors.
    I really enjoyed it.

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  3. A captivating wonderful story that I love !! I love your way with words Heather for example …. ” His approaching presence ripples the air like concentric circles disturbing the lake of her solitude” etc, Gorgeous !! Love the finish of the story too!! Thanks HL

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