I started the following short story several months ago, and while I had an idea of how I wanted the tale to begin, I honestly wasn’t sure how it should end. So I let it sit, worked on other writing projects, and forgot about it. I came across this piece five days ago and still didn’t know how things were going to turn out for my protagonist, but I felt more inclined to take the journey with her. I’m pleased with the outcome, and I hope you will be, too. Enjoy!
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hl gibson, author 
Great story. A Fresh Perspective is a wonderful story. I love your scene descriptions, and characterizations. Really good eye. Only 2 spelling errors on page two: quiet time, not quite time; and cellars doors probably should be cellar doors.
I really enjoyed it.
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I find I do my best editing after I’ve hit the send key! Thanks, I’ll correct those right away!
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A captivating short story which draws the reader in. I like it.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the compliment.
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Read this story it´s wonderful!!
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A captivating wonderful story that I love !! I love your way with words Heather for example …. ” His approaching presence ripples the air like concentric circles disturbing the lake of her solitude” etc, Gorgeous !! Love the finish of the story too!! Thanks HL
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I glad you enjoyed this story. I labored over it a bit, but it worked out in the end.
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